Banana Bread
Another piece, this is based right on the subtittle of this exercise "Another Granma Repice". I do not know how, but a group of warm colors come out the top of my head. Yes, something warm, maybe peace, some thing belong to house stuffs of a small family kitchen which is orange, pink and a little yellow. But it is not all, i like to put some contrast like the star at the right top to make the paper less boring.I hope it fit with the contents(>_<)
posted by Luong Tu Dung @ 9:12 AM
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Have you ever had fresh banana bread, warm right out of the oven? Its quite yummy and comforting. There are quite a number of elements that I like about this design. The colors and font are very playful and warm. I like how the letters kind of dance across the page.
There are a couple of things though that detract a bit from the design and need adjusting. "Ingredients" is spelt wrong. The bullets in your lists do not line up. The bullets in the bottom list seem to be distorted and do not match the rest for some reason.
The list on the bottom is better indented than the one on the top. There is a good amount of space on the left there. How would it look if all the elements had that much space on the left? Try it.
And is that white space on the right intentional? If so, why???
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